tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5750341687975932111.post6643721135424130606..comments2023-05-02T05:08:20.747-04:00Comments on JD Paradise: The Next Big DragonslayerJD Paradisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07945134213244873038noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5750341687975932111.post-53390287882324589602012-11-08T17:21:41.583-05:002012-11-08T17:21:41.583-05:00Thanks!
It's actually modeled off of a Honeym...Thanks!<br /><br />It's actually modeled off of a Honeymooner's episode - I haven't seen the HMs in years, but I thought it'd make an interesting frame.<br /><br />It needs to be a full-length, I agree. JD Paradisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07945134213244873038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5750341687975932111.post-9789966625970135992012-11-07T12:27:09.664-05:002012-11-07T12:27:09.664-05:00Not bad. The flash fiction format is a bit too res...Not bad. The flash fiction format is a bit too restrictive for this story idea, in my opinion. Some parts of it feel a bit abrupt or sketchy. I think it would make a good full length short story.<br /><br />I thought your idea for the MacGuffin was excellent. Not your normal magic item.<br /><br />I also thought the "adventurer" as a hard luck husband trying to get by was nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com